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Chapter 3: Negotiators don't kidnap

Date Posted: November 7th, 2014, 2:46 pm

Author Notes

I missed you! Taking a break from updating was hard to do...

But now third chapter is starting and, oh my, is that a new character? :3

Comments

Beautiful page, and again the Nordic/Celtic background is great. May I make one suggestion though. And maybe out at least a number 3 on the page, so we know the next chapter is starting. I only suggest this because if you're reading straight thru like myself, it's not a totally obvious transition. Sorry, if I'm overstepping. :)
@Poppy: Oh no, no! You're not overstepping at all! That is something I've thought about too before but your comment made me finally switch to doing that. :D